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Lost to Life
Contributed by
sride686
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:09:14 PM in AEST
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Dark and deep runs this road and were it goes I’ll never know
And I walk it freely for my life is mine
I walk it amongst most of man kind
They all walk blind but only I can see
That the end of this road is death and greed
But what do I care theirs nowhere to run
I look to heaven but theirs nothing above
For the Lord has turned and shaded my soul
So forever I’ll walk for my hearts turned cold
And my hate reaches down and touches my soul
My eyes turn red and fill with rage
So I cut my wrists to feel my pain
As I watch the blood run don my wrists
And hit the floor in eternal bliss
My head goes back as I feel life flow
My mind gets light as I start to go
Soon their will be no more hate and no more pain
No more lust and no more shame
Soon it will end my life will be done
And no one will miss me that’s why this begun
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Re: Lost to Life
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:25:34 PM AEST
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| Sounds like you have some secrets...Powerful poem....Scorp. |
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Re: Lost to Life
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by heartquake on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:31:15 PM AEST
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| good write... and nice preview of the poem too lol... it was the main reason i read it and i'm glad i did... one of the better suicide poems i've read in a while... good job |
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Re: Lost to Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:44:30 PM AEST
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Lovely & unique words i commend you..I can relate to your pain.....and for the record you would be missed..Touched as always
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Lost to Life
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:44:05 PM AEST
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have u ever been lost to life as 2 what the asnwer is 2 all this pain, yes and i found my answers, i wish i didn't, you'll find yours but before u do? make sure can live with them after, keep up the writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Lost to Life
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:15:46 PM AEST
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wow that is really gud. i like that a lot. i totally agree as well, i dont see whats at the end of the tunnel that continues to beckon me forward, but somehow i press on. something, though im not yet sure what that something is, is calling my name, and it is my choice to return the call and follow it. you can do the same. great write,
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: Lost to Life
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:12:07 PM AEST
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You caught me by surprise with this one my friend. I have to totally agree with Ben on this one. Once you find the answers which I'm sure u will. You gotta be able to live with them thereafter. It's a hard and long journey, Steve.
Remember you will not always like the answers u get.
Otherwise a really strong and powerful write.
I'm always here for u my friend.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Lost to Life
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:11:20 PM AEST
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wow i say this is deep very deep.
Take care don't hurt yourself .
I will be praying for you.
good write |
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Re: Lost to Life
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by Shishke_Bob on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 09:08:44 PM AEST
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OMG, this poem was so full of pain and emotions that it hurt my heart to read it, because it spoke so true and it hit home as well. I too know what its like to have these questions with out answers, but just know thqt in time there wil be an answer just one to answer them all, and then life will be better. I will pray that you never feel like this again. God bless.
KaBob |
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