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Eternal Damnation
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:15:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Trippin down a subway tunnel; minding my own biz
A rather peculiar elder man suddenly appears
He mutters and moans;
then casts some stones
afterward points angrily at me
"You've cursed us all with your bleak outcome,
and now with haste I shall send you home!"
Deep down, dark, into the fiery grasp of eternal damnation for YOU...
Before I could speak, the ground let go of my feet,
and I began my neverending descent into the pits of Hell...
That's where I'll dwell
until my darling angel can come rescue me.....
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2005-05-09 12:15:38]
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Re: Eternal Damnation
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by Remy on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:34:41 PM AEST
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"and then squirrel ate dib's crazy head..." yea, crazy. definitely. bring out the angel!!!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Eternal Damnation
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:39:09 PM AEST
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| Lmao@Remy. I know, I know...I'm working on it! Scorp. ; ) |
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Re: Eternal Damnation
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by Kyarn on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:58:23 PM AEST
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*amused greatly*
That's great...lol
I like.
~Kyarn |
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Re: Eternal Damnation
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:18:18 PM AEST
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| lol..a peculiar man...hmmm wonder who he was..lol |
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Re: Eternal Damnation
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by Thin_skin on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:50:30 AM AEST
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| Riiiiiiiiiiight.......... lol very intriguing i must admit lol erm....yeh |
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Re: Eternal Damnation
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by Thin_skin on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:50:30 AM AEST
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| Riiiiiiiiiiight.......... lol very intriguing i must admit lol erm....yeh |
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Re: Eternal Damnation
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:25:29 PM AEST
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K so now I'm confused ... is the peculiar man the crazy one ? Or is that you ? LOL
"Calling all angels ... code 4 we have a situation here ... "
Nazzy ~
( Psssst ... I thought you weren't gonna tell anyone we met on the T. O. ... LOL ) |
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Re: Eternal Damnation
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:51:15 AM AEST
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| Scorp, I really like this one. A nice little imaginative story with descriptive wording and the hope of the knight in shining armor that will come and rescue you from the pits of hell. A great writer leaving us readers wanting more…the sequel. Will the darling angel come and rescue you? Ah, another story we await from you. |
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