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I am #2
Contributed by
edward_jarvis2000
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:37:41 AM in AEST
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I am a boy,
Living a life of shame,
I am a seeker,
Seeking faith,
I am your cousin,
With daily depression,
I am a student,
In 8th grade,
I am a believer,
Believing I shouldn’t live,
I am your brother,
Looking to my reflection,
I am also your brother,
Looking up to you,
I am your son,
Living life in pain,
I am someone,
Who tries real hard,
I am the one,
The one you take care of,
I am in someone
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Re: I am #2
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by Remy on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:30:17 AM AEST
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number two? oi, so self-deprecating... but smooth style, reads a bit like a beatnick. i like it.
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Re: I am #2
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by Archie on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:07:21 AM AEST
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There is a song I like in which the chorus goes like this:
"Do you know where you're going to?
Do you like the things that life is showing you? Do you know?
Do you get what you're hoping for"
When you look behind tou there are open doors. Do you know?"
Hopefully knowing who you are will help you to know who you want to be. Good write. |
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