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Come Again
Contributed by
Remy
on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:10:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i got a twenty dollar bill
you know i want to take this hill
i will i won't before tonight
but your smile says it's alright
there's just a little bit of something
that you could make a mention
tell me please me now this one thing
no wait please pay attention
your eyes divert all your endearment
with hands tuning the station
clenched fists against the parent
loose neck of imitation
i swear the subject we spoke of
was shallow on the poolside
a repitition of yesterday's love
carried upon newfound pride
silly stories sporting new shades
an entourage of same old's
brass tacks lined on what you made
at dawn the night plays cold
you owe me a dollar bill
my car won't start on the hill
it will i don't till tonight
how fares it? you say alright
old days new nights stay so fresh
you'll sucker me to answer yes
on exchange we bid good greetings
outside an old gas market
since when have we last been meeting?
last recalled as i park it
now i swear i can't even remember
how you been? busy working
could it be much like last decemeber
what then did the work mean?
never mind you're bent on driving
up late out in the book shop
fish chips lead to some conniving
and smokes back at the gas stop
we could travel past all the depots
late right till the morning
the notion suits with what you know
so forget any of the warnings
i got a twenty dollar bill
you know i want to take this hill
i will i won't before tonight
but your smile says it's alright
today tonight stays better yet
another sucker and yes another yes
i guess you know that i'm alright
just like any other given night
and then to this one thing.
oh please remind me.
was i thinking, were you thinking with me?
how could you let me get oh so iffy?
tell me sweetie stories.
no you won't bore me.
i was thinking, could you listen to me?
could you come again oh i'd be happy!
Copyright ©
Remy
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2005-05-09 03:10:36]
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Re: Come Again
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:36:15 AM AEST
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| this is so beautiful! :) |
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Re: Come Again
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 05:46:13 PM AEST
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THAT WAS WRITTEN WITH A GREAT PATTERN THAT FLOWS ALL THE WAY THRU! TO ME IT'S LIKE A SONG,LIKE A MILD HEAVY METAL ONE(compliment)!! I REALLY AM IMPRESSED WITH THE WAY YOU DO WRITE!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Come Again
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:47:09 AM AEST
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| heh... I had to comment on this again and tell you it reminds me of Brand New's song "Mixed Tape" *smiles* |
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