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Dark New Day
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:57:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The day darkens
As the sun falls
The shadows are broken
In the mist of it all
But the moon is bright enough
To light my way
Untill the sun rises
To the dark new day
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-05-08 20:57:33]
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Re: Dark New Day
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by Zeldianus on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:03:14 PM AEST
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| very somber, but i love it! |
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Re: Dark New Day
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 11:13:33 PM AEST
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I liked this one. You're work is always a pleasure to read.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Dark New Day
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 11:26:44 PM AEST
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| =] i loved the tone of this one especially. for some reason it made me feel good, and i am in a bad mood. i dont know how in the world i could get good feelings from this but i did. this was excellent to read clark, but that is no different than your norm. and its good to have a norm such as that. |
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