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In Your Arms
Contributed by
merry
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Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:04:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Laying in your arms, surrounded by warmth
As tender as I would have imagined
If only things were different
Could I find my way to your door
Without guile or coy rejoinders
I would look you in the eye
Thinking I have met my match
You would confirm it with a smile
So genuine it would make me shiver
Standing so close to you
Knowing we have been closer
Having danced the words so many times
Music ripples across the skin
Nerve endings respond to a song
Did I tell you I think of you often
Turning on a Mona Lisa smile
I look out the window at my reflection of you
Entangled in abstract love
Smoke and mirrors were made for us
To seek and hide where we must
Let me rest awhile in your arms
Memorize the feel of you
Before the light changes and you are gone
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merry
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2005-05-08 20:04:34]
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Re: In Your Arms
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:06:29 PM AEST
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| the words in this poem are defitnetly brought alive. i think you did an incredible job. i really enjoyed it- all of it! sweet,simple,mesmorizing. |
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Re: In Your Arms
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:07:17 PM AEST
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| the words in this poem are defitnetly brought alive. i think you did an incredible job. i really enjoyed it- all of it! sweet,simple,mesmorizing. |
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Re: In Your Arms
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:27:35 PM AEST
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i think thats the sweetest pleace to be, in the arms of one who loves you, and i love how you ended it too, this is beautiful gaille:) hugs n' love always, nessa
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Re: In Your Arms
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:36:10 AM AEST
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Very good write, I know exactly how you feel and its a great feeling to have!
Keep writing and take care!
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