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(Title Deleted)
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concrete_rose
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Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:09:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Re: (Title Deleted)
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:56:01 PM AEST
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Oh this was just sexy and down right naughty. I love it.
Nice write.
Jane xxx |
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Re: (Title Deleted)
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:57:37 PM AEST
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You should not have spelled it "c-u-m",
that's tacky.
But hot poem.
--Ghosty |
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Re: (Title Deleted)
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 11:49:41 PM AEST
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I went to leave a comment for this the other day but then they deleted your poem & my comment. Anyway, HOT, HOT, HOT!!! I'm going to jump my lover's bones now...lol
Scorp. |
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Re: (Title Deleted)
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:31:04 PM AEST
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| thats tight, you went off. there ain't nothing wrong with a freak.lol. |
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Re: (Title Deleted)
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by heartless_soul on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:10:31 PM AEST
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OMG! this was probably one of the most erotic poems I have read (and it is because they deleted it*lol* ). I dont know why they deleted this it wasnt too explisit in what was said... any way I realy loved the line
"here it comes I'm off to heaven
I close my eyes and count to seven"
that was just amazing, I am sorry that they wont let you post this kind of stuff with out being a premium user because I would love to read them. do keep it up. Be well |
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