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The Greatest Friend
Contributed by
smiley_jennyxoxo
on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 11:55:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You're the greatest friend ever
You show you have trust and you honor
Me for who I truly am
You don't judge me once you see me on cam
You have unconditional love
And hate you choose to shove
Aside for the light
Of the good in flight
Soaring to the heavens
He thoughtfully lends
You his trust and power
It passes on, no slower
Than it's given to you
For the light to shine through
Into my heart and soul
My heart becomes full
With all the kindness
Do you really mean all this?
You can honestly trust me?
I'm even lovely?
Am I as angelic?
Will you let me frolic
About on my own
Have I not been thrown
From this circle?
I've not fallen from the middle
Out into the open
As a vulnerable heroin?
Copyright ©
smiley_jennyxoxo
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2005-05-08 11:55:17]
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Re: The Greatest Friend
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by Kachina on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 01:19:08 PM AEST
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| This is a heartfelt poem. Simple but so beautiful and nicely done. |
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Re: The Greatest Friend
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 12:11:41 AM AEST
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lovely poem, true friends are the greatest gifts:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Greatest Friend
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:43:18 AM AEST
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If you have friends in life who are always there and care for you, you are truly blessed.
Nice work
Steve |
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