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Perfect Imperfections
Contributed by
Savannah
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Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She steps aside and looks at her world
She sees the perfection of it
And is disgusted
So she goes through changing it
Tilting this picture a little to the left
Setting that down just off center
Until finally the imperfections jump out
And then she walks back into her life
She walks on, admiring everything wrong
Until she gets the urge to step out again
And all at once she sees it
It's perfect again, and not through her work
Someone else has been there
Someone else has seen her imperfect life
And has set everything right again
Not know, never knowing
That she loved the perfect imperfections
Copyright ©
Savannah
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2002-12-28 18:40:00]
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Re: Perfect Imperfections
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 06:59:04 PM AEST
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I think you wrote this for me... I liked this a lot really made me think... I dont really know what else to say.
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Re: Perfect Imperfections
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 09:48:29 PM AEST
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This is such a beautifully written poem......very heartfelt and touching...with such emotion put into it...thanks for sharing this one....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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