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Void
Contributed by
Djarven
on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 05:54:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Behind the walls of despair
A voice of dread cries out
The sorrow can’t be heard
Cause no soul cares enough
Behind the bars of resignation
The voice surrenders with aversion
To the dark silent night of void
Where hope shines with absence
In chains round wrists
Cold steel round soft skin
Strangles the life within
She soon withers away
Beyond recognition
And She bleeds
Thick
Juicy
Red
Tears
Now
Forever
Copyright ©
Djarven
... [
2005-05-08 05:54:06]
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Re: Void
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 06:11:37 AM AEST
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| another great piece, well done |
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Re: Void
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:03:38 AM AEST
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Oooh, I really like the style of this one, the way it kind of slows down toward the end is good.
I really like the second stanza, too.
The only think I could say about this is that it should really be 'around' not 'round'
Still a good write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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