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A BLANK PAGE
Contributed by
Onslaught
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Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 12:52:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A blank page
Filled with words
That no one will read
That no one can relate to
That no one understands
A blank page
Filled with words
Words from my heart
Words that change nothing
Words that laugh back at me
Words that for a moment
Only serve to distract me
A blank page
Filled with words
And this is what I知 saying
I知 fading and I知 shining
I知 laughing and I知 crying
I知 living and I知 dying
I知 hurting but I知 trying
A blank page
Filled with words
That no one will read
That no one can relate to
That no one understands
A blank page
Filled with words
Words from my heart
Words that change nothing
Words that laugh back at me
Words that for a moment
Only serve to distract me
Copyright ﾂｩ
Onslaught
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2005-05-08 00:52:20]
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Re: A BLANK PAGE
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by juliette on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 01:21:47 AM AEST
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Life is really not fun for me right now, as you will be able to tell by reading practically any of my posts but especially the last few. i LIKED THIS SO MUCH BECAUSE THIS IS EXACTLY HOW i FEEL AND ISN'T IT AMAZING SOMETHING LIKE THIS POPS UP ONSITE JUST WHEN YOU NEED TO READ IT? lol Please excuse the mess I have made of the CAPS as I am too tired to go back and fix them - another LOL
Anyhow, I feel your pain -
Great, theraputic write!
Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: A BLANK PAGE
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by MorningGlory on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 01:45:42 PM AEST
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| I cannot help but feel the same way that you do. I was fortunate to come across this poem and sense unease but a need to continue on because strength is a good quality. Even though it can be so hard not to scream out in frustration. |
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Re: A BLANK PAGE
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:28:23 AM AEST
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All your poems are so out -there and deep
Filled to the rim with emotion, sad but sweet
Your words are truly inspiring
Great Write
~Dawn |
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Re: A BLANK PAGE
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by Archie on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:25:00 PM AEST
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Since I'm talking to you in the forums I had to check out how you write and this is good. The title is very similar to a poem that I have called the blank page.
"...So the stories begin on an unwritten page the dreams and things that become us..." |
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