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emptiness
Contributed by
decievingeyes
on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 12:26:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Emptiness running through my viens. From this peircing evil that throughout time remains. And until the end of time I will keep on pushing it away. But its left a stain that will not let me be rid of my pain. I just pray that all this insanity will someday drive me sane.
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Re: emptiness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 12:42:49 AM AEST (User
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interesting structure.
most perculiar and purposeful in structure.
I rather fancy this piece.
Strong and progressive.
It is a powerful write, riddled with sombre tone.
-Romanticist. |
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