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STUPID METAL IN ME
Contributed by
gina
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Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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It's killing me, i can't stand it anymore
Wish to take it off and throw it out the door
Captured,that's how it makes me feel
No more light snacks between the meals
I should put it inside for almost a year
How can i hate something and keep it that near!
Stupid arrangement of bands and wires
If you tell me it's nice then you are liars
Why should i pay all those pounds
To get what doesn't make me well pronounce !
It's enjoying the time in my mouth it spend
As it became my tongue's very best friend
No more kissing, DAMN! just embraces
All because of those silly braces
MMM DON'T YOU WORRY ,HEHE , IT'S NOT FIX,MEANS I CAN TAKE IT OFF IF NEEDED LOOOOOOOOL :)
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2002-12-28 16:20:00]
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Re: STUPID METAL IN ME
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 04:47:37 PM AEST
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Wow gina, i can personally say i've never had to have braces and when i was younger i always wanted them for no reason coz i thought they were pretty lol....but i hear so many people say what a pain they are.and how they hate them....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it...hope you get them out soon??? lol....
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Re: STUPID METAL IN ME
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by Opium on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 07:17:05 AM AEST
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| Great way of describing your situation to the ones who never been there :) and as for the kissing, I think a little electric shock would add a passionate tast :P |
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Re: STUPID METAL IN ME
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 05:43:25 AM AEST
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| Nice Gina...now i knew the reason that is making u so sad...It s just u cant kiss me like be4 but dont worry we ll get used to it....LOOOOOLL |
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