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LOVE YOU SO
Contributed by
kachina
on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:42:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The moment I opened my heart to let you in
I saw this great love starting to begin
Many nights of dreaming finally came true
When I opened my eyes I saw a vision of you
I have loved and I have paid the cost
And I have felt the pain of the love I lost
But now I know I have truly found
An angel who walks upon the ground
You go beyond limits and exectations for me
Just to show your love endlessly
I could search the world my whole life through
And never find another "you"
You're a wonderul person, you're one of a kind
A good man like you is hard to find
I wrote this poem to let you know
I hopelessly and completely love you so
Copyright ©
kachina
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2005-05-07 12:42:02]
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Re: LOVE YOU SO
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:53:51 PM AEST
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"But now I know I have truly found
An angel who walks upon the ground"- these lines called out to me the most, I l know exactly what you mean... a strong write here with many lovely sections! A great love poem! A+++ |
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Re: LOVE YOU SO
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:55:46 PM AEST
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Great write....keep it up.
=Jen= |
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Re: LOVE YOU SO
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 03:59:43 PM AEST
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Kachina this is a heavenly divine write. You've conveyed it so well. A pleasant and delightful read that captures the true essence of love.
Well done.
*hugs*
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