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You're a dancing memory in the wind...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:02:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I lay under the starry night sky
I hear the wind softly whisper your name
It's like I've heard it call before
For the voice sounds exactly the same
You dance across my memory
Each and everyday
Holding me in your loving arms
To the soft musical wind we sway
Shooting stars streak across the sky
Burning brightly they go
We look into each others eyes
As love begins to flow
You embrace me tightly
As I tenderly kiss your lips
My arms around your neck
Your arms over my hips
This memory comes to me
Every single day
As the wind whispers your name
In a soft and subtle way
Dreamy eyed I look up at the sky
As the pleasant memory fades away
Until the same time tomorrow
When the wind blows your memory my way...
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:07:42 AM AEST
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I feel like singing...indulge me!!
*Love is in the air!!*
Beautiful write, Sue....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by Remy on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:11:20 AM AEST
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mmm, warm and yummy. beautiful memory, thanks for sharing...
~Remy~ |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by venkat on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:18:19 AM AEST
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A sweet memory..as if your heart is singing..
lovely write..
venkat |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:22:29 AM AEST
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AMAZING poerty mina! wow
i love this, it makes me feel so happi
this is very capturing poem!
well done |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:37:03 AM AEST
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lovely again, Sue. I love the imagery you put in this, as well as the feeling. It almost seems like a peacful sadness. (only saying sad as to the last stanza). The title was catching, and fit well with the rest of the poem as well. Very nicely done.
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 06:58:06 AM AEST
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| Your writes are so strong and grow stronger with each one you write Sue. So much love in this one I could almost get lost in it reading. I love to read of such strong love and passion it really lifts the soul and sugar cots life. Your writes always takes my mind out of the dark world I live in right now and I thank you for that….Your friend Steve |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:33:23 AM AEST
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How beautiful how sensious pale notes play
this poetic melody and my heart dances . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by hooray_its_jen on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:43:07 AM AEST
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This gave me the warmest feeling I could have hoped for. You are so good at capturing certain emotions and memories.
It was a true pleasure for me to read this!
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:50:35 PM AEST
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Beautiful memories of love. Forever a place in your heart. Vivid emotions so loving and sweet.
Fabulous poem
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 05:35:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem---like a distant memory....I really like this, it left me with a warm feeling.
Scorp. |
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Re: You're a dancing memory in the wind...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 08:34:27 AM AEST
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Wonderfully romantic and nastolgic!
I love the flow as well...Bravo!! |
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