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KEEPING UP APPEARANCES
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:32:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Wiping away
the steam
clearing the mirror
revealing me
The mirrored reflection
the one i see
hating all it stands for
despising me
Masking my appearance
for you to see
nothing changes
makes no difference
Mocking words
i replay over,
through,repeat
your beautiful,
so pretty
im glad you're
at ease
with what you see
To protect your feelings
we'll not discuss my mess
Smile, im fine
i'll be wiping the mirror
you go now
join the rest
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sweetoccasion29
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2005-05-06 23:32:16]
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Re: KEEPING UP APPEARANCES
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:45:51 PM AEST
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heart breaking poem and sometimes we must dry our eyes and deceive the world into thinking we are free any pain.
the private wound is the deepest
i can relate very much to ur thoughts
lovely poem |
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Re: KEEPING UP APPEARANCES
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by Remy on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:19:52 AM AEST
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oi vey, tough to keep that one on the up and up... smart write though. i like it.
~Remy~ |
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Re: KEEPING UP APPEARANCES
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:32:02 AM AEST
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A sad, but outstanding write conveying ur deepest emotions well. I can so much relate to ur poem. No one really knows about the pain and heartache that we hide within us. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: KEEPING UP APPEARANCES
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:39:33 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem tainted with sadness but
in time all will be well, u write beautifuly i feel
each words as though it were mine 2 listen 2.
Dorian Chambers |
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