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How Could You Leave Me Like This?
Contributed by
juliette
on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 10:11:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I held this all in for so long, now I am falling apart
There is only so much space inside a wounded heart.
I already said goodbye but letting go is not as easy
When I walk this world alone and
there is nobody here to ease
this hurt in me.
How could you leave me like this?
When I just learned to lean on you,
Began to believe I could count on you,
You would always be here for me to run to,
No matter how tough we would make a way through,
When I finally felt safe enough to love you –
You were gone and I am left here to carry on
Everyday thinking about everything you will miss-
How could you leave me like this?
You begged me to give you the chance to make up for your every
wrong,
Separately we fell victim to circumstance but together we were
twice as strong.
Learning to feel this way for someone I never dreamed you would
become,
Did you know that you made me proud, in my heart you stood out,
I saw so much of you in me.
How could you leave me like this?
When I just learned to lean on you,
Began to believe I could count on you,
You would always be here for me to run to,
No matter how tough we would make a way through,
When I finally felt safe enough to love you –
You were gone and I am left here to carry on
Everyday thinking about everything you will miss-
How could you leave me like this?
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juliette
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2005-05-06 22:11:02]
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Re: How Could You Leave Me Like This?
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 10:15:50 PM AEST
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This was a sad poem .. but i like it cause i
can relate to this poem.. my dad left me
when i was only five and now he doesnt
have nothing to do with me. .. my dad considers me dead,, Great writing on this poem and great rhyming.. |
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Re: How Could You Leave Me Like This?
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:18:05 AM AEST
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Julliette
This is a wonderful poem and a beautiful tribute to your father.
It is happy yet sad and your feelings and emotions jump out and grab.I am touched by this poem. Beautifuly written.
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