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Hunger Pain
Contributed by
MorningGlory
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Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 09:58:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Make me feel
some kind of Emotion
other than sadness.
This Hunger pain
which afflicts the heart
so unmercifully.
Just love me once
So I know
In that moment
I was Happy.
Copyright ©
MorningGlory
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2005-05-06 21:58:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hunger Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 04:13:49 AM AEST (User
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More moving than a winding piece of literature.
I think the analogy and symbolism within hunger pain and the context you have placed it within is perfect.
A powerful piece.
Crestfallen and well expressed.
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Re: Hunger Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:27:15 AM AEST (User
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Very nice write..
God Bless |
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