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Pocket Girl
Contributed by
Alina
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Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 09:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She'll buy the gun, the pills, the knife
But in the end she wont sacrifice
She'll cut, she'll steal, she'll wish all were dead
But in the end, sorrow remains in her head
She'll try to heal and reminisce over old scars
But in the end she's not a star
She never shone, she'll never shine
Because I keep that little girl
Locked in this pocket
Heart of mine
Copyright ©
Alina
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2005-05-06 21:55:26]
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Re: Pocket Girl
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 10:11:37 PM AEST
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kind of sad:( but i like it.. great write
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Re: Pocket Girl
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 01:11:19 PM AEST
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| Hey, hey. That was an amazing write! It flowed with such ease as to slide off the tongue, my hat is off to you. It was very dark and sad, with an especially strong ending. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work. |
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