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What You Didn't
Contributed by
needs_change
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Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 09:20:05 PM in AEST
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The music is fading out
Nothing left to cover my shouts
Never loud enough for me
Always to loud for you
But that doesn't matter now
Because all along you Knew
You know my tears
And all of my fears
You knew the scars were there
And as i'm leaving you this last note
I just want to let you know
It's not because of you did
It's because of what you didn't
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Re: What You Didn't
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by Zeldianus on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 09:49:54 PM AEST
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| i like this. the message you are getting across is very strong, and whoever did (or didnt in this case) should be ashamed of it. |
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Re: What You Didn't
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by Naughtygurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 09:50:40 AM AEST
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I like your poems i think i'll comment on more because u commented on mine : )
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