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Chains
Contributed by
darkkai
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Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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bound by chains of solitude, I look for the rare bonds of fortitude.
the passion I seek blinds my judgment, sadden by this I yearn for atonement.
what shines brights is the spirit of innocence. the warmth of the golden sun brings
the happiness I can't obtain cos' your heart is the same.
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2002-12-28 08:00:00]
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Re: Chains
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:24:43 PM AEST
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Even though you have no idea what it means or why you wrote it......the fact is it came from your heart and soul.....it's somthing that came to you....and that means more than anything could possibly mean....i love the beginning of it where it says bound by chains of solitude....you write beautifully my friend keep em' coming i enjoy reading your poetry....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Chains
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by thorns on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 02:12:21 AM AEST
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| sometimes short is good--it's hard to be boring when it's short. lol interesting use of imprisonment immagry. |
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