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Fish Swimming in my Head

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Fish swimming in my head
A tank of warming confusion
Gray matter of great importance
Contemporary old fashioned chorus

Plagiarism and copyright thoughts
Patten the invention in mind
A socially deviant debate
Spoken in languages of Odysseus the great

Porcupine needles flaring out
The back of line pushes up
Incredulous display of patience
Awaiting the night of my passions

Enjoying the times of my life
The pleasurable scenery endows
Operating on the stitch that binds
This world with rest of mankind

The bombers drop the supplies
Inconsistent targets engulfed
Rocketing on a moonlight drive
Painted concrete desperate to be alive

Running water drips in waves
A judiciary stuck in the good old days
Parliamentary procedure sets precedence
Creating a closer look at the volatile case

A confirmation of belief
The consequences of the relief
A proclamation of deceit
Reservations of the crooked police

Invasions into friendly residences
Broken glass windows stir the street
Thrown from chairs on balconies
Splattered corpses at your feet

Pandemonium and disarray admirably disagree
Decorum and order, restored for a nominal fee
Inhibited elevation to any known heights
Prohibited elation as the poet writes

Still a star in the galaxy of the sun
Orbiting an outlined axis of rotation
The Black-hole will be sure to outrun
Devouring gravity as its spinning

Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-05-06 17:48:04]
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Re: Fish Swimming in my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 06:04:24 PM AEST
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Your poem's always tell such a story...Really good. Scorp.

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