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You Killed Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 04:15:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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..and she writhes in tear-stained sheets
through fevered nightmares and whispered screams
gifts of filth from a heaven divine
revealer of secrets and bringer of lies
Making me nauseous.
I have given you all I have to offer.
So please let me die inside this place I call my so-called catastrophe.
I cannot control the ghosts that destroy your every memory.
No matter how beautiful it may seem.
From the inside out I can see my own self-reflecting tragedy.
Change
And you've changed
Into something I wasn't ready for
Now you're torn between your empty thoughts
Of another day's lost cause
a backfire of potential success
years and years of development gone
I hope you're satisfied with what's left of this
and for your sake I hope your life was worth theirs
where do victims hide before they kill?
where is the security we were promised?
it's easier to remember than to forget
I choose to remember what has been done
for the sake of sanity
goodbye to you
goodbye to those who loved you
goodbye to those who have forgotten
goodbye to those who have rememberd
so what is left of my
ribbon that still bleeds black
this is truth painted as
shattered glass, twisted metal
and lifeless bodies...
all desire for originality has slowly deminished
how can one live life mirroring all that is known
all that is not know
I am mirroring an agonizing suicide
this is suicide
tears are common now
tears that quickly turn to blood
as your dicreet obsession
and inhumane thoughts
eat away at my soul
rip my eyes out
this curse has stolen my home
don't doubt the world
for your own actions
will determine when
I will kill you from my mind!
You Killed Me!!!!You Killed Me!!!!You Killed Me!!!!You Killed Me!!!!
You Killed Everything That Was True Inside Me!
May you fall to never again arise
May you cease to ever again be
May your soul eternally be, in seas of pain
Pleading, churning, drowning
Pleading, dying, burning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You Killed Me!!!!You Killed Me!!!!You Killed Me!!!!
You Killed Everything That Was True Inside Me! You Killed Every Inch Of My Sanity!!!!
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MajesticPoet
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2005-05-06 16:15:54]
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Re: You Killed Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:50:05 PM AEST
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| wounderfully written and put. |
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Re: You Killed Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 06:12:09 PM AEST
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woawwwwwww I want to say intense but its far and beyond that this is raw driven anger at its highest peak your style here is incredible all I can say is wow!! keep them coming wish I could say something better than what I did you took thoughts and words from me with this one
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Re: You Killed Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
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by Grimm on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 02:47:53 PM AEST
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| It wouldnt have mattered if it was long, the problem here is that its too streched out, but nice otherwise |
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