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Field of red roses
Contributed by
Djarven
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Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:47:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There she stands glowing in the field of red roses
Hugging the magic dusk, kissing the sweet sunlight goodbye
As the last wind plays with her long blonde hair
There she falls too her knees among the red fragrance
Grasping the moisten soil, crying out her despair of tomorrow
As the roses caresses her soft skin red
There she lies down on the starlit ground
Staring at the stars, longing for a better life
As the stars sings their poem of love to her
There she withers away to the great endlessness
Closing her eyes, ending this beautiful nightmare
As the red field of roses fades to black
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Re: Field of red roses
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by bethie on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:59:35 PM AEST
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| "ending this beautiful nightmare"...oddly, I relate to this line. Interesting poem. thank you. |
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Re: Field of red roses
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:21:01 PM AEST
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I love love love this!
I have a thing about roses. lol. They are so beautiful, yet so sad.
This poem is just like that, really. Beautiful and sad....
I love the thought of stars singing and kissing sunlight.
Great imagery.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Field of red roses
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:22:43 PM AEST
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This is a very well written piece of poetry. I loved the imagery u used and I love the flow of the poem too. A sad, but captivating poem. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Field of red roses
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by kpsniper2003 on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:15:44 AM AEST
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| Thats a very beautiful poem |
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