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Eventide
Contributed by
Djarven
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Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:44:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I stand looking at the moon from my window
I see this girl, full of joy dancing around with her friends
But when she’s left all alone her sadness comes crashing again
She’s out there completely blue making angels in the snow
Praying that they will take her away from this world
Ending this charade-life of make believe
Copyright ©
Djarven
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2005-05-06 12:44:28]
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Re: Eventide
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by bethie on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:50:47 PM AEST
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It is very difficult to find genuine people in this world. Alot of phonies out there, but we still try.
Sensitive write. Thank You. |
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Re: Eventide
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by Astralbermudian on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 07:25:45 PM AEST
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| hey this poem definately portrays a large percentage of the modern teenagers. Maybe after reading this I can learn to be myself when around people instead of being a class-clown. Thank-you for this insppiring piece |
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Re: Eventide
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by kpsniper2003 on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:14:06 AM AEST
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It sounds like shes very lonley
good poem |
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