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On the day you were born.
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:02:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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On the day you were born.
I held you close and felt your tiny body warm against my own.
I looked at you and looked at you as you slept.
I felt as if my eyes couldnt hold enough of you.
Then you looked into my eyes with that trust and innocence.
And we locked hearts.
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2005-05-06 00:02:41]
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Re: On the day you were born.
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:15:26 AM AEST
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That's beautiful so warn and tender i can feel your joy shining through very nice writting . . .
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Re: On the day you were born.
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 08:38:08 PM AEST
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Awww..this must have been such a great feeling!! I envy you...
Lovely write....
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Re: On the day you were born.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:06:03 PM AEST
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I agree whole heartedly !!! Well written short but beautiful .Nothing can compare to a mothers love and bond with her baby!!!
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