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Depths of Despair without You
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:35:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Another sleepless night another shattered thought
Of a once undying love who in dreams is even sought
I wish your angelic smile would shine on me once more
I wish those loving eyes would look upon me as before
Almost every poem is for you every sadness-filled tear I’ve cried
Every fading breath spent missing you hoping you’ll be by my side
It’s all for you
My first love
My beating pulse
The air in my lungs
As you left any purpose any happiness did withdrew
While my heart cries
I am in the depths of despair without you
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
... [
2005-05-05 20:35:51]
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Re: Depths of Despair without You
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:43:21 PM AEST
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This was awesome Rach...And you are right I really feel this way and relate soooo much to this....Very good job and very heartfelt...Great Job
~Clark |
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Re: Depths of Despair without You
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by Zeldianus on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:09:11 PM AEST
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| oh the terrible feeling of heartache!! i totally understand! very well written |
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Re: Depths of Despair without You
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:20:44 PM AEST
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| Straight from the heart...nice job. Scorp. |
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Re: Depths of Despair without You
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 11:05:54 PM AEST
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What a haunting poem written in such pain
that makes me wish I had some words of
advice to give you. My only advice is that in
time the pain of this person leaving will pass
and that you will find another person that you
can love and I hope that he will be the person
that is the one for you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Depths of Despair without You
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:36:31 PM AEST
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| Oh wow!!! This is so touching.....excellent write.... |
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