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The Gathering
Contributed by
bear
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:37:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It was a rainy day
The clouds had pushed the sun away
For this was a sad day
Friends and family gathered around
To watch the one they love be buried into the ground
As the preacher spoke
His mother's heart broke
His father for once began to cry
And dropped to his knees asking why
They buried him into the ground
Forever knowing he was heaven bound
Copyright ©
bear
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2005-05-05 19:37:03]
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Re: The Gathering
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:45:36 PM AEST
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this poem broke my heart..i have lost many loved ones
u captured the pure sadness tho of a funeral and how painful it reeli is
great job |
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Re: The Gathering
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by Zeldianus on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:14:02 PM AEST
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| very morose. but then again, that was the idea. i like it |
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