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the perfect gift
Contributed by
dude
on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I exhaust my mind deciding on the perfect gift for you.
How can I unearth the ideal offering to express my precise sentiment for you?
Suddenly, I stumble across the exact endowment worthy to be your gift.
I hope that my intimation adequately conveys my gist.
Let it be a sonnet for my wonderful wife.
Of whom I plan to share the rest of my life.
So it's to be a written memento of not only my delight and appreciation,
But also, it's to be the origin and reason of my endless elation.
Take this gift and let it warm your heart with bliss.
As I Anxiously await the repercussion of your delight with a heartfelt kiss.
Copyright ©
dude
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2002-12-27 23:00:00]
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Re: the perfect gift
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:11:06 PM AEST
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Aww this is so sweet of you to write, Let it be a sonnet for my wonderful wife, how many guys do ya see writing beautiful things for their woman like this....I think this is beautiful....thanks for sharing it..I'd almost ask you to tell us what happened after you gave her this perfect gift but perhaps that part should remain CENSORED LOL.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: the perfect gift
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by venkat on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:20:55 AM AEST
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So sweet and perfect expression.a beautiful poem which should be read by a sweetheart.
Thanks a lot for sharing the feelings..Venkat |
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Re: the perfect gift
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by Mystery_Girl on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 05:23:38 AM AEST
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| Wow..i think this is awesome very lovely....and it should certainly warm the heart of that special someone.....Take care.....Tanya...:-) |
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Re: the perfect gift
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by rustygrl33 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 11:51:12 AM AEST
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| thats sweet! i like that!! good write |
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