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Suicide
Contributed by
Chanti
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Im afraid ill be on the news too soon,
a child who could not cope,
Im afraid ill be found dead on the floor,
holding a suicidal note,
Tell me that you love me,
youve never told me before,
but if you do not mean it,
itll only kill me more,
your words are like the razor,
that i hold to my wrist,
cutting me so deep inside,
as if i dont exist,
the way you scream,
the way you yell,
why must you make life,
seem like such a hell,
i hate it when i see you,
i hate the way you act and walk,
it bothers me when your yelling,
even when you talk,
its because you dont say nice things,
i no longer wish to be,
all of the things that you do,
are slowly killing me.
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2002-12-27 22:40:00]
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Re: Suicide
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:48:26 PM AEST
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I used to be with someone who did nothing but yell and scream and holler alot when we were together, but i knew in my heart that i was the only one who understood him, and i knew that the only reason that he said and did the things he did was out of fear which many times was no excuse, but i loved him so much that none of that mattered because i understood him completely, and he knew that...I think a love like that doesnt ever die, but it surely can kill who you are inside slowly but surely and without you even knowing it ....even years later....thank you for sharing this one it's very deep dark and sad...i hope someone isn't making you feel this way because it's a very painful place to be my friend...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Suicide
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:26:30 PM AEST
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| wow that was really sad and very deep. You can hold I know you can. You just have to stay strong. Nicely written though. |
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Re: Suicide
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:34:16 AM AEST
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Chanti, your poems always drive me close to tears. I think because I can relate to them so much and they strike me so hard. To be honest with you I liked this poem, but I don't like how you suffer or seem to be suffering. You need to talk to someone that is close to you. I feel that every poem I read of yours a little bit of the pain you have is transferred to me that is odd i know. Your poems are amazing. Stay true to yourself...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Suicide
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:45:05 AM AEST
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I like this, it reminds me of my own life, my parents like to yell alot about stupid things. They never seem to really take the time to care about waht they say. Also, i like the slant rhymes you used, very ice.
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Re: Suicide
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 02:36:08 PM AEST
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| this poem is great... |
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