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The Soaring Dove
Contributed by
Mesano
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 04:32:19 PM in AEST
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A snow-white dove soars overhead,
Flapping his wings so peacefully,
Saying the things we've left unsaid,
"This is how it was meant to be."
Born anew, a shining star,
Beautiful in every way,
Here to travel, near or far,
With a predecided 'time to stay'.
Living his life the way he's meant,
Fufilling the dreams he is able to,
Grinning or scowling, along he went,
Never lacking new things to do.
But all good things must come to end,
No matter the way they are meant to go,
So enjoy with him the time you spend,
And happiness you shall forever know.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2005-05-05 16:32:19]
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Re: The Soaring Dove
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 04:50:08 PM AEST
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touched my heart very beautiful write
Im sorry for your loss
peace be with you
Michelle |
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Re: The Soaring Dove
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 05:15:09 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry for your loss, well written |
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Re: The Soaring Dove
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 05:19:43 PM AEST
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| i think your poem is beautiful and holds positivity which ois most important and really brings the poem to life, great job. im sorry for your loss. |
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Re: The Soaring Dove
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by BuggY on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:51:08 PM AEST
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hey mexy!! sorry about your uncle! but great write! always here to talk hun!!
luv ya
xxxx |
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