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Calling
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:15:28 PM in AEST
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Calling out your name
You hear it while you’re asleep
But you wake alone.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-05-05 14:15:28]
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Re: Calling
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by bethie on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:23:03 PM AEST
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I believe that Haiku in it's purest form is:
first line, 5 syllable
second line 7 syllables
third line 5 syllables
I love the Haiku form and yours wasn't bad.l |
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Re: Calling
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by Archie on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:04:06 PM AEST
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| Great haiku. Thanks for reading my poem as well. |
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Re: Calling
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 04:09:05 PM AEST
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I was never good at haiku.
you did an awsome job pixie girl.
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Re: Calling
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 04:33:28 PM AEST
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| I lovely haiku. Well done Krissie. |
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Re: Calling
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:19:46 PM AEST
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One of the better Haiku I've ever read dear Pixie, but would be better if it was not so sad!
Love and hugs to you dear, and please know how much I appreciate your nice comments on my poems.
Thank you so much
Warm love and hugs!
consue |
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Re: Calling
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:01:03 AM AEST
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beautiful and dreamlike . . .
always beautiful work u do pix . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Calling
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by bernard on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:45:31 AM AEST
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| Very good Haiku but soooo sad. Top marks from bernard. |
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Re: Calling
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:59:41 PM AEST
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Awesome Pixie speaks volumes
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Calling
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 07:05:49 PM AEST
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You've got it down to a "T" Pix...well done..
I love it..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Calling
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by givingin on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:04:32 PM AEST
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beautiful!
So sad and moving.
I really liked this one.
It was rather short, but still good.
MUAH
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Calling
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:52:19 AM AEST
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I am not good at haiku's but you have a talent for it. Great job! I liked this
christina |
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Re: Calling
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 09:59:38 PM AEST
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excellent haiku, so sad... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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