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Because I have this heart...
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:47:13 PM in AEST
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i'm a sea of tears for you
let me free the fears in you
because i have this heart
i'm a cloud of love for you
let me free the dove in you
because i have this heart
i'm the rain that rains for you
to wash away the stains in you
because i have this heart
i'm the play that plays for you
actors that sing praise for you
because i have this heart
I'm the tear that falls for you
the echo that does call for you
because i have this heart
i wait for you, my fate for you
i stay for you, my day's for you
all... because i have this heart
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Re: Because I have this heart...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:55:35 PM AEST
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my god!!! this is such an excellent write
the ryhme is the best part about it
the use of words it keep me going throught the whole poem
it was amazing
i can relate to this poem
love is strong and i do everything and i would do anything for the one i love
great write looking very forward to more
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Re: Because I have this heart...
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:03:00 PM AEST
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this is purely romantic she will love this should you let her read it
Michelle |
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Re: Because I have this heart...
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by bethie on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:03:54 PM AEST
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Sensitivity can be a burden, "because i have this heart".
Very sensitive poem. |
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Re: Because I have this heart...
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:24:04 PM AEST
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That was really, really beautiful...I think my heart just skipped a beat...*gulp*
Scorp. |
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Re: Because I have this heart...
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by Kachina on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:34:46 PM AEST
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| Wow! This is great! Beautiful! |
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Re: Because I have this heart...
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by bear on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:43:38 PM AEST
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| There is only one word for this poem......beautiful. |
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Re: Because I have this heart...
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by sride686 on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 01:38:33 PM AEST
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Truly as master piece this write was and very well written. I’m not big on poems that use the same line more then once in the same write. I only have one write that does that but this was very well done and much enjoyed. I really liked the last stanza
wait for you, my fate for you
i stay for you, my day's for you
So many times love can feel like your fate when its gone and this last verse really left the reader in pain for all you lost and event though its gone your heart will always feel it. Thank you for asking me to read this piece I’m glad I did and it was much enjoyed. Take care my friend….Steve |
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