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For Tye
Contributed by
kiira
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I will try to put my feelings into words for you
But no matter how much I say I love you it is inaccurate by the next second
Because my love grows for you every second of everyday
I will try to make you happy
But everything I do for you is not good enough
Because every little thing I do for you could be done better
I will try to give you everything
But no matter how much I give you
I wish I could give more and more
I will try to be with you forever
But forever isn't long enough
I will try to kiss you each and everyday
But I want to kiss you each and every hour, minute, and second
I will try to do all of these things everyday
But I will not try to love you
Because it comes naturally
Copyright ©
kiira
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2005-05-05 12:46:12]
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Re: For Tye
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by GurlyTye on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:59:57 PM AEST
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| Thsi is a good right but one that confuses my alot...My name is Tye and i am not sure who you are or if this is for me.? but i would greatly like to know!! |
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Re: For Tye
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by Kyarn on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:02:21 PM AEST
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AWWWWWWWWW!
... (Yeah, that was necessary.)
I liked that one alot. It was really good.
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Re: For Tye
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:01:53 PM AEST
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excellent write
love is the best thing in the world
keep writing
keep smiling
|sweetstranger| |
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Re: For Tye
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by Kachina on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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| Very well written. I enjoyed this very much. It is so sweet. |
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Re: For Tye
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by brokensoul on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:19:21 PM AEST
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| amazing write i love it!! love cannot completely be put in words thats what makes it so amazing |
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Re: For Tye
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by Unbreakable on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:16:43 AM AEST
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I really loved this poem! I normally can't stand poems about love because I find them way too flowery and over-exagerated, but this was good...you put your feelings into words very well! Keep it up!
Krystal |
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