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I'm Sorry
Contributed by
charmed_socks
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 04:40:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm sorry for the things i say,
I'm sorry they get in the way,
I'm sorry i say them to you,
And I'm sorry but you help me through.
I'm sorry in thnik maybe you care,
I'm sorry i hope your always there,
I'm sorry that my heart chose you,
And I'm sorry but my all needs you.
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 05:44:35 AM AEST
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Hmmm interesting.
theres quite a few sorries on this write.
Maybe it needs alittle work with this piece but other then that it was not bad. |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:01:12 AM AEST
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charmed-socks
You needen't be so sorry for so much.No woman needs a man.Love is trust and if there isn't trust there isn't love.
To me your poem spoke of sadness and control.
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Concrete_Rose on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:28:19 AM AEST
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| I loved it, from my opinion your poem speaks the truth, well all try to put up a front when it comes to love, and giving in, because we feel hurt inside, but instead we walk around with a nonchalant attitude about, no one wants to die lonley, thats why God gave Adam Eve, in the end we all need someone.... |
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