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Not Like This
Contributed by
tres_estrellas
on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:52:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I watch you
I love you
I hate it
Watching the deep red
Pulling, dragging it out of yourself
I shiver
And tense up
You feel nothing
You are falling
Falling into darkness
I want to teach you
I want to show you
But you need to learn on your own
But what if you go?
Please don't leave
I get cold
Being alone
Just don't over do it
And we'll be okay
Don't do that too often
And you'll be okay
I know you hear me
But you cut yourself deeper
Theres something
That you want to teach me
But I know
I've seen it
And more
I don't like it
I did
But I don't
And why do you?
I wish I felt nothing
But I do
I want to be numb
But I won't go that far
I want to be with you
But not like this
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Re: Not Like This
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:02:33 AM AEST
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so sad and emotional write.
well done on this. |
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Re: Not Like This
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:07:19 AM AEST
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| So sad.. well done! |
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Re: Not Like This
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:34:39 AM AEST
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Awesome writing. Very sad but written from deep within. I hope this write wakes this person up.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Not Like This
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 05:04:44 AM AEST
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This was such a sad write, conveying such vivid expressions. I simply adored this.
Well done.
Jane~ |
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Re: Not Like This
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:32:35 PM AEST
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| Very strong emotions kept together with a unique style of write. Keep you head up, i liked it a bundles! |
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