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The end of a blade
Contributed by
bear
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:54:25 AM in AEST
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As I sit and wonder
Is my life nothing but a blunder?
As I sit alone
Wondering what they would write on my headstone
There is no light in this room
This is the place I shall make my tomb
With the end of a blade
I will make my life fade
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2005-05-05 01:54:25]
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Re: The end of a blade
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:08:27 AM AEST
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Very, very, very sad but good writing.
Hope u feel better real soon.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The end of a blade
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:13:04 AM AEST
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sad so very sad.
please dont do it your life means alot.
if you ever need to talk let me know and PM me.take care |
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Re: The end of a blade
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:31:02 AM AEST
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| Lots of emotion....Keep writing, it's good to let it all out. Scorp |
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Re: The end of a blade
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:51:16 AM AEST
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This is very sad! alot of emotions in this poem but good.. hope you get better soon.
hugs butterflygirl40. |
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Re: The end of a blade
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:04:15 PM AEST
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So many times we feel as if death is our only resort in life. It isn't.
This poem speaks volumes for your sadness and expression is vital to feeling better about ourselves. Write more and get all the pent up emotions out. Write about who/what is troubling you and in time you'll find the healing spot you need to be in. Best of luck to you in finding and healing the pain. God Bless! Angel always...joni |
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