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Silence
Contributed by
phill
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:21:34 AM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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The silence is overwhelming
I’m felling crushed by time
Worry and doubt are setting in
My love feels like a crime
You said you needed space from me
Your mind I can not change
I feel so lonely so insecure
My heart it feels so strange
Your friendship is slipping away from me
It’s like having a hand that’s full of sand
The harder I struggle to hold you
The quicker you slip from my hand
I struggle to hold on to you my love
Time seems to be running slow
I have no choice but to walk away
No choice but to let you go
I feel I’m stuck in limbo now
I’m falling into an abyss
I know that something’s lacking now
And I know that it’s you that I miss
I feel worse off without you
You’re an important person to me
I wish that you could just realise
The friend you had in me.
Copyright ©
phill
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2005-05-05 00:21:34]
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Re: Silence
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:31:28 AM AEST
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| Sad poem, but good write... |
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Re: Silence
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:05:54 AM AEST
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Very sad but awesome writing.
I hope things work out for u really soon.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Silence
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:44:39 PM AEST
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| Very strong and from the heart. I have the same feelings for someone close to me, these words are like the ones i couldn't find for myself. Thanks for the awesome write and good luck to ya!! |
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Re: Silence
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:43:03 AM AEST
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This Touched my heart in more ways than one....I am truely Speechless...Its Beautiful
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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