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Love.
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:44:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Point your lashes down
And you can picture my face.
Im smiling.
Open your mouth speak with your heart.
And you can see my soul.
Im Waiting.
Place your arms around my Waist.
And you can embrace my uncertainty.
Im shaking.
Press your lips against mine.
And try to catch me.
Im falling.
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Butterflygirl40
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2005-05-04 23:44:43]
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Re: Love.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:21:52 AM AEST
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Very sweet and original.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Love.
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:10:59 AM AEST
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awwww that is so swwet and cute.
awsome job. |
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Re: Love.
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:32:16 AM AEST
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Very good write. Simple yet superbly written.
This is a poem that connects with the reader.
Keep writing and I'll keep on reading!
-Butch |
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Re: Love.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:54:47 AM AEST
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I really like the way you put this together.
Everything just seems to fit perfectly.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: Love.
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:14:49 AM AEST
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Very beautiful in deed enjoyed reading it . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Love.
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:56:28 PM AEST
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How sweet and unique........wonderfully imaginative, and great way of looking at love.
Enjoyed that it was different and refreshing, Autumn,
And thank you so much for the lovely comment you left on my poem to Stitch. I appreciated it very much
Warm Love
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Re: Love.
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:59:29 PM AEST
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hmm
very sweet indeed |
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