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Elapse of Pain and Tears
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:40:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Followed by the shadows of darkness
I hear footsteps behind me again
Stalking me and haunting me
I miss you not my friend
Carefully placing every step
I wince within your grasp
Your cold, dirty fingers grip my throat
For air and life I gasp
Cutting off the circulation
My body going numb
Behind me must I keep my past
Afraid of what’s to come
A great elapse of pain and tears
I cry away my sorrow
I cannot face the yesterday
Nor the next tomorrow
In a place of fear and cold
A world of black and white
It is my undying soul
That will radiate the light
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2005-05-04 21:40:47]
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Re: Elapse of Pain and Tears
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by tin on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:45:22 PM AEST
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| great write, i for one know what it's like to have your past comeback to haunt you.i especially like the last four lines, keep it up. and thanks for sharing it with us. |
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Re: Elapse of Pain and Tears
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:46:50 PM AEST
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| Very good poem!..I can relate to this poem and I like it.:) |
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Re: Elapse of Pain and Tears
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:04:28 AM AEST
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| This was a really good write my words could never do it justice. It had so much pain emotion in it and was written with perfection in your choice of words. Once again another great write and I look forward to many more. Everyone of your writes I read I see how beautiful you must be as a person. Take care and keep up the great works of art. Talk to you later….Steve |
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Re: Elapse of Pain and Tears
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by Jaycee on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 09:34:32 PM AEST
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| this poem and your other my fire represent a strong change in content in your work - namely, progression from the tortured life you live to a... what's the word, a liberation, a rebellion, an unshackling of who you are from the darkness that tries to smother you. if you were just simply a fine poet, i would be impressed, but someone who has to live the way you do, and keep the sanity and rise above it and shines with such brilliance, well i don't have words to describe that... |
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