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Death Sentiments
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:44:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Empty but not of nothingness
For death is only as equal as depictions
Instilled in the minds excess
As a lie is yet untold, but still scentenced convictions
The grave open beyond thoughts
Of another life that is null
Like the paper exceeding the inks blots
And the blood vacant veins full
Life sarrated by the passionate ashes
Scattered torwards the stongest wind
The idea of memories appear to pass it
For the absent substance of death cannot defend
. . .
All will void
As all will die
Life destroyed
Not from death
But memories left behind
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-05-04 20:44:54]
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Re: Death Sentiments
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by Zeldianus on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:53:24 PM AEST
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| great job! very powerful! |
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Re: Death Sentiments
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:24:25 PM AEST
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| =] this better get more comments than these here. excellent poem clark, though you already knew i thought this, after reading the first stanza =] i especially loved the last line in this, if you couldnt tell with the titles i came up with... |
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