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The Hopeful Warrior
Contributed by
Zeldianus
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Onto the bloody battlefield I ride
With my high held pride.
Warriors come from left and right
To join in the unending fight.
With a terrifying roar
I charge, head-on, to settle the unpaid score.
My sword held high;
Lightning flashes in the sky.
My arm swinging to and fro,
Warding off the attack of my foe.
Outnumbered a thousand to one,
Will this day ever be done?
Long have I been on the roam,
Longer still since I have been home.
My eyes are tired from this endless quest;
My body wants only to rest.
The light of my day
Is the only thing that keeps despair away.
He is my strength when I am weak.
With his love I am able to perform at my peak.
I long for the day when I will return to his embrace,
To see his smile light up his face.
This day cannot come soon enough;
The day that I will truly triumph.
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Zeldianus
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2005-05-04 20:40:30]
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Re: The Hopeful Warrior
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:56:58 PM AEST
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This is great Seth...Great structure and amazing ryhme to fit it...I really like the imagry..ans awesome ending too...good job
~Clark |
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Re: The Hopeful Warrior
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by OnAngelswings on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:52:15 AM AEST
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| this is a very good poem Seth...you are really very good....Shari :) |
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Re: The Hopeful Warrior
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by candysears on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 08:55:41 PM AEST
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Very very good...Divinely written...
I love the phrase "I will return to his embrace"
Brilliant!
God Bless! |
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