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TRAPPED
Contributed by
life_goes_on900
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:08:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Im trapped and theres no way out.
Im trapped and its just getting worse.
Im trapped and all I can do is pout.
Im trapped and it feels like a curse.
Im trapped and you know my lifes going down.
Im trapped and you just seem to smile.
Im trapped and all you can do is watch me frown.
Im trapped and you know ill be here for a while.
Im trapped and all I do is scream.
Im trapped and I hate this feeling.
Im trapped and I wish this was a dream.
Im trapped and its something ive always been consiling.
Im trapped becouse of you.
Im trapped and you cant fix my life.
Im trapped while you yell at me for what I do.
Im trapped thats why I hold this knife.
Im trapped and my life will always be a dump.
Theres only one way out I can see.
Im trapped and the only way out is for me to jump.
So I can finally end my lasting misery..............
Plz comment... thanks ...
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Re: TRAPPED
(User Rating: 1 )
by KiLin on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:11:37 AM AEST
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| I like it. It makes me rememeber when I was a little younger and I felt those same sort of feelings. You did an awsome job of conveying your message. I do think that the repeating is a little overboard, but not enough to through off your meaning. Great write! |
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Re: TRAPPED
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 06:39:05 PM AEST
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| Truly amazing poem!!!!! |
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