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My Love Takes wings
Contributed by
Jayraja
on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Within me burns the fire of raging desire
Ignited by your sensuel words and tender gestures
My love takes wings to fly across the oceans
To gently touch the bruises and scares
Embedded in your tender heart, hurting
So the pains of those bruises and scares
Of yesteryear transit into me, easing the pain a little
Only a little, for the pains you have endured
Is so much that only time and my love
Can fully erase and wipe out completely
And in its place, anchor the pleasures and joy
Of my solemn love, scintillating your heart beat
Into upbeat, arousing the imprisoned desires anew
Exalting your lonely soul into new found
Blissfulness and overwhelming ecstasy nonpareil
Copyright © 2002 Joel Raja Kumar J
Copyright ©
Jayraja
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2002-12-27 19:40:00]
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Re: My Love Takes wings
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 08:39:36 PM AEST
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Awww this is soooo beautifully written for that someone you know whom is in pain...i hope he/she reads this poem...this is breathtaking i know i would cry because it's so beautiful...thank you for sharing this one im sure they will enjoy it and it should surely lift some of the pain they have....
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Re: My Love Takes wings
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:32:48 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Joel from India..:>).. Awesome write here...I'll be looking forward to reading more or your work..
Jenni from Trinidad...
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Re: My Love Takes wings
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 09:17:49 AM AEST
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Hi Joel,
This is a beautiful write.... keep it up!!
Oh and welcome to YPDC!! :)
~Dani~ |
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Re: My Love Takes wings
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:50:23 PM AEST
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| thank you for sharing a beautifully written poem, I could feel your love across the oceans, seas and valley's thanks for sharing your heart so true |
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