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No Lube
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:20:11 PM in AEST
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Once upon a time a girl got messed up really good
NOW PLEASE PAY ATTENTION: as this is about my childhood
I used to self medicate in a liquid form of fashion
then one day some monsters did an act on me that did not involve passion
Fast foward a few years when my curiousity is piqued
I go to the doctors to find out if I'll ever hear the pitter-patter of small feet
the doctor runs some tests, checking for this and that
the answer comes back loud and clear---NO!---and that's a 99% fact
Oh well, I shrug my shoulders, I pretend I do not care
but what the world didn't see is that my heart had already begun to tear...
I wonder how I thought those people were my friends
I wish god had dropped a clue regarding their evil intents
If I ever see them I don't know what I'd do
I'd try to make them understand my heartbreak and despair
and maybe take them down with me into my own living nightmare.......
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Re: No Lube
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:36:46 PM AEST
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heartbreaking Im so sorry this happened to you
Michelle |
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by Zeldianus on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:39:38 PM AEST
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| oh my gosh! i completely sympathise with you. my heart wrenches at your loss!! :( |
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by DrowningInKarma on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:44:19 PM AEST
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| wow....that is unimaginable...my heart goes out to you ....Tanya |
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by OnAngelswings on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:20:32 PM AEST
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| I am so sorry you have had such a great loss...but so many unwanted children need a mommy and daddy to love them as their own...I totally understand the heartache you're having...Your in my prayers...Shari :) |
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Re: No Lube
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:20:04 AM AEST
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In truth ... this was the first write of yours I read. I didn't comment at the time because I wanted to start at the begining. I am glad I did, but this one still hung over me. This is a write that pulls heartstrings and as I am certain that you have heard more optimistic statments in this regard ... I will say simply ... you presented this well and I am deeply moved by your loss. I hope you feel at home here and realize there are a good many people that you can turn to for support if and or when it is needed.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: No Lube
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by Jyssvw on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:24:29 PM AEST
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| truely moving, i am sorry for your loss, your write can help you gain some momentum |
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Re: No Lube
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by Aquaelius on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:40:02 PM AEST
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Wow... that was really suprising... wasn't expecting that. I mean kids are overrated anyway... dirty diapers and mooching until they're about 27... oh, that's me.
But anyway, I sympathize... very sad.
Thanks for sharing.
Aq. |
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Re: No Lube
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:42:26 AM AEST
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| Scorp, this is a powerful statement. Sometimes it's just as hard to come forward with things that weren't your fault as it is things that are. It's horrid what some will do to others. You've moved people and that's always a signal for a good poem. J. |
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Re: No Lube
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by seci on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:42:08 AM AEST
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| you are a good poet and the poem ,i like |
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Re: No Lube
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:26:26 AM AEST
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Scorp, that was an incredible write and you were courageous to do it. Also sad...and very sad that there are people (or should I say monsters) that victimize innocent people like that. I would love to say more about these monsters but guess I won't get on my political soapbox today.
You are one h___ of a cool person and one h___ of a poet!!! |
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