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leaving you
Contributed by
littlesarahwoowoo
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:17:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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It happened for me, oh so fast
I found a love I thought would last
The feelings I felt I thought were true
I never wanted to leave you alone, and blue
But I can't live a lie, the one I built with you
I am sorry for this, for you had no clue
I have to leave you now and forever
I'm sorry this happened,but whatever
Your love was true or so you said
But when I was with you I always felt dead
You told me "theres a future"
But you don't see it with me
Those were not your words
But thru you I can see
Copyright ©
littlesarahwoowoo
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2005-05-04 15:17:00]
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Re: leaving you
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:42:27 PM AEST
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Re: leaving you
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:03:43 PM AEST
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That's sad. Well written, a good narration, but sad.
Take care,
David |
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