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A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Mr. Bernard of fairy fame
I need to ask a favor
I have been having trouble
And losing sleep I savor
It seems an epidemic
As many poets of late
Are spending more and more
Of their evenings wide awake
Perhaps the troubles of the East
Have affected other lands
And caused the man who brings us sleep
To use generic sand
I close my eyes
And sleep will come
But in the morning
My head is numb
I don't feel rested
In fact it's bad
I can't recall
The dreams I've had
Could you please ask
The Fairy Queen
Perhaps to help
Or intercede
Spell the sand
Or loan some dust
It is important
Sleep’s a must
For things of dreams
Barely conceived
Are harder still
To be believed
And what would happen
To The Queen
If sleep deprived
She isn't seen
So Bernard
You must understand
The danger
Facing fairy land
Please ask of her
I beg of you
Return to us
The sleep we knew
~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:19:58 PM AEST
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| Nice! It seems like poetry comes naturally to you. Good writes.... |
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:22:38 PM AEST
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*smiles*
Well... I must say, Nazzy, that this is different to what I imagined.
I love it, it's cute, and fun.
Great write my friend..
Sleep sweetly,
Phil xxx |
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:24:56 PM AEST
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OH, PLEASE BERNARD!!! YOU ARE OUR LAST HOPE! I HAVEN'T SLEPT IN DAYS!!! *Sobs*
Beautiful piece, cheri. A desperate plea to the man of the fairies, exquisitely woven. Yes, I believe it is an epidemic... Many poets have been deprived of slumber, including me... So please, Bernard, whenever you get this, send a message to your Fairy Queen, and ask her for some sleepy dust. :-) Huggles and love for Nazzy, Bernard, Fairy Queen, and the rest of us that are suffering from Insomnia... *Sighs* Another night of endless voices, waiting to be heard and tales to be told... Wonderful piece. I completely understand where you're coming from, my friend. All my love. Forever,
Your sleepless friend,
Stephy. *who hopes that the Fairy Queen get's this message soon!* |
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:30:38 PM AEST
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Nazz, it looks like you and i are suffering for the same illnes.
I loved this, it was funny, smart and cute at the same time. And it was lovely writen as well.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:23:42 PM AEST
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*sighs* Yes please Bernard...
and while you're at it....
Maybe she could get rid of strange nightmares, including the one about me being swallowed up by something that looks like mashed potatoes?
hope this works, Naz
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:10:22 PM AEST
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How cool!! I love this , very well written . You have a broad range of style with your writing!!
Leia |
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:04:20 AM AEST
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Lol cute...
awsome write nazzy |
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 06:50:26 AM AEST
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| Very well written and flows very nice. Also very witty and keeps the reader sucked in all the way to the end. Take care…Steve |
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Re: A Pettition To The Fairy Queen : CO Bernard
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by bernard on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:00:36 AM AEST
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| Naz I have petitioned the Fairy Queen on behalf of all insomniacs. Her advice is to read more of bernard's Fairy-Tales. Oh and not to eat or drink anything heavy after five or six in the evening. The sand man is working overtime and has one big job to get to everybody in the world at the right time. Poem about Sunday Should follow or who knows another Bernard Fairy-Tale. Have fun Nath and keep smiling from bernard. |
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