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Dig Holes in my Hand
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:39:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i'm the bridge under
a troll of death wonder
i'll eat all the flames
my inside black stains
i want all the waves
in my head of cold graves
so let me eat stones
corpses, and souls
momma can't save me
i'm never was maybe
she left me the leaves
of dead tree disease
i play in the sand
dig holes in my hand
my castle is crumbling
loneliness rumbling
so close the cellar door please...
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2005-05-04 14:39:29]
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Re: Dig Holes in my Hand
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:53:20 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem! Your wordplay rocks... |
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Re: Dig Holes in my Hand
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 06:35:42 AM AEST
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| This is a good write and it is very different and original witch makes it that much better. Great use of words and it flows quite well. Take care and keep up the good writes…STeve |
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Re: Dig Holes in my Hand
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 06:56:21 PM AEST
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Very good write...
God Bless! |
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