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In Love Awkwardness
Contributed by
cOld
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:27:58 PM in AEST
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I told him that I loved another
and he said he understood
I never meant to hurt him
I told him I was in a bad mood
I asked him why he liked me
and he said it was something
something he just couldn't explain
and I said I understand, I feel just the same
Then it came to me, like a bullet from a gun
I had just given up on someone
doing exactly what I had done
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2005-05-04 13:27:58]
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Re: In Love Awkwardness
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:46:07 PM AEST
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| very nice write, telling the tale of love and it's games. Good job and keep it up! |
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Re: In Love Awkwardness
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:25:35 PM AEST
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a very awkward situation u r in. Destiny has a funny way sometimes. A very well written piece expressing the wanting of another.
Goodluck and I hope things work out 4 u.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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