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Those Haunting Eyes
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:50:48 AM in AEST
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From the first I saw
those haunting eyes,
ever was I drawn
to their haunted stare.
Deeper and deeper
did I drown,
within their depths
of pooled eclairs.
Delicious pools
of ice-blue mien,
as cool breezes
sensual and sly.
Like a siren's song
a succubi's sigh,
seducing attention
from this mortal's eye.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2005-05-04 09:50:48]
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:27:37 AM AEST
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| wow---lucky Lady! Nice. |
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:34:59 PM AEST
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| wow nice......... |
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:01:22 PM AEST
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I like it how lucky you are Jane:)
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:11:40 PM AEST
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*Giggles*
Aww a poem for me, how sweet of you Baronhawk.
This was lovely and i'm blushing profusely LOL.
Hugs,
Jane
P.S. Thanks for the poem. |
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes
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by freckle on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:42:02 PM AEST
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Baronhawk,
A nice enjoyable read. I believe Jane is a beautiful lady both inside and out and is worthy of your tribute.
Good job.
Carol |
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:17:18 AM AEST
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| Very nice...succinct but a thoroughly worthwhile read. Lovely tribute to jane... :) |
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 05:54:03 PM AEST
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*grins*
Lovely eyes, indeed, they are.
Good words, o Hawk. I like the alliteration. It being my own preferred ornament.
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Re: Those Haunting Eyes
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:30:33 AM AEST
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Baronhawk, that was simply lovely, romantic and alittle off-hand. I love your picture, now I understand..........you're handsome, young, and debenair! Oh Baronhawk..........how you do fare!
Enjoyed your great poem,
Warm love
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